Here are 3 more creations from Jamie...
Notice she has improved quite a fair bit in terms of choice of words, rhymes and her thought process to compose them...
A big blue dolphin lies on land
Drying herself with a big blue fan
She has blue and green skin
And also one unique fin
Apples, peaches, plums and pears.
Limes and lemons grow up there.
Can you guess what it could be?
I know, I know it is a tree.
Teddy teddy on the shelf
Smiles just like a beautiful elf
We play at the merry-go-round
When teddy's asleep, we don't make a sound
I love you, teddy...
1 comments:
nice... very creative indeed!!
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